Earth-717: FANTASTIC FOUR Volume 1 - Chapter 1

Earth-717: FANTASTIC FOUR Volume 1 - Chapter 1

An alternate time. An alternate world. While in space investigating a storm of cosmic rays, Reed Richards and his team of explorers are accidentally exposed. Barely escaping with their lives, the four soon discover that they have been imbued with incredible powers. Together as a family, they decide to become the world's newest superhero team: the Fantastic Four.

Earth-717: Fantastic Four Vol 1-1

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Filed Under "Fan Fic" 5/11/2014
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Abary - 5/11/2014, 1:39 PM
Yay Fantastic Four. Nice start, I can't wait to see how the story evolves further. At least I know you're not going to turn Doom into a jealous love-interest for Sue.
Niklander - 5/11/2014, 2:56 PM
Man I like it especially the interaction of Johnny and Sue and I can imagine when Ben turns Johnny will give him a hard time.Love those moments in the F4
WeddingTux - 5/11/2014, 5:04 PM
this is good but.. how is this any better than Roger Cormann's Fantastic Four? that one was like the celluloid embodiment of perfection ,':-)
TheHero - 5/11/2014, 6:20 PM
Good job, as usual Doom!
Mrcool210 - 5/11/2014, 9:35 PM
interesting start so far...didn't expect johnny and sue to wrestle, oh well, interesting read, keep it up
MightyZeus - 5/12/2014, 12:03 AM
Great start off to a new Chapter. Reading through your version of the Fantastic Four has made each of it's character's interesting.
Doopie - 5/12/2014, 1:51 AM
good start, nice bit of foreshadowing too. Sue is being well set-up. think she might be key in the end.

can't wait for Doom. Doom writing Doom will be a treat i'm sure
Mrcool210 - 5/12/2014, 2:14 PM
^he'll probably have doctor doom kill the fantastic four and take over the series.
HeisenbergSaysRelax - 5/25/2014, 2:27 PM
Good way to start off this story. I have to say, so far my favorite element is the characterization of Ben. You've done a really good job at writing his dialogue and getting his personality across, especially when he refers to science-y stuff as "doohickeys" and "mumbo jumbo".

Not to say the others aren't also represented well, 'cause they are, but I especially like the way Ben is coming off so far.

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