Earth-717: X-MEN Volume 1 - Chapter 8

Earth-717: X-MEN Volume 1 - Chapter 8

An alternate time. An alternate world. Professor Charles Xavier is starting to lose hope for his cause. Humanity largely seems in favour of registering and segregating mutants. In a world paralyzed by fear, Xavier unites a small band of young mutants to become the symbol of hope they have always been destined to be: the X-Men.

Earth-717: X-Men Vol 1-8 by AcidicHeart

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MightyZeus - 2/5/2014, 8:05 PM
Great work as always Doom.
This was a pleasure to read.
BenjiWest - 2/6/2014, 2:10 AM
Another great chapter Doom. Liked the pacing, and wow; Erik is one ruthless and vicious character. Good job!
Pasto - 2/6/2014, 5:14 PM
Screw this.
HeisenbergSaysRelax - 2/6/2014, 6:55 PM
My last comment on this fan-fic was humor-based (more for my amusement that anyone else), so this one will be a more constructive comment.

You've done a good job of describing scenes with heavy action. The first bit in particular does a great job of really showing the reader what is happening. It doesn't seem like I'm reading what is happening as much as I'm seeing what is happening which is important. It makes reading more entertaining. so, i appreciate that. Keep it up.
Space - 2/7/2014, 1:46 PM
damn this Chapter was deep, nice work
Lozzy - 3/7/2014, 4:06 AM
Had some free time so I thought I would catch up on 717. Great to see a Magneto centric chapter. Also cool references to the larger Marvel universe, such as Hydra and Nick Fury.

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