The Fear of Punishment

The Fear of Punishment

A Punisher fan-fic, written by a friend of Frank

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By Bread - 8/28/2012


The Fear of Punishment

It’s late at night, a man named Marc is sitting in his car, counting a large amount of money. Marc is parked in an empty alley somewhere in New York City. Another man, named Al, approaches and enters Marc’s car, he sits in the passenger seat.

Marc-
Hey bro.

Al-
Hey!--guess who just scored himself some nice coin!

Al pulls out a large roll of 20 dollar bills.

Marc-
Nice! How much?

Al-
Nine-fifty, got most of it off these dumb-ass polish guys that could barely speak English, I gave em’ that cut shit that’s full of baking soda, those dudes so stupid they wouldn’t even be able to tell the difference! How’d you do?

Marc-
I did alright, just a buncha’ college kids that wanna party in the city that never sleeps.

Al-
Yea… hey man, turn on the radio, I wanna listen to somethin’.

Marc turns on the radio, and it is tuned to a local news station and we hear a female reporter already in the middle of a story.

News Reporter-
--with a total body count of 26, the entire Jacovi mob family was brutally murdered by Frank Castle, also known as The Punisher, who is still at large. In other news, Wilson Fisk has been proved innocent--

Marc turns the radio off.

Marc-
I don’t need to listen to that shit.

Al-
Yea…

Marc-
… You ever think about him?

Al-
Who?

Marc-
That Castle guy, the punisher, do you ever think about him?

Al-
Why should I?

Marc-
What do you mean why should you? The guy devotes his entire goddamn life to killing people like us.

Al-
Dude don’t go and freak out and all that shit, the guy’s not gonna come lookin’ for us small-time dealers. Like the chick on the radio said, he’s off killing mob bosses and all that shit.

Marc-
Yea… alright…

Al-
Don’t worry about it bro, the big bad punisher aint’ gonna come down and put you on ice. Now put on some music.

Marc-
Alright.

Marc turns on the radio again and starts flipping through some of the channels. Then we hear a knock on Marc’s window. Marc turns his head to look, and then he gets shot through the window, and killed.

Al-
AAAAWWW SHIT!

Al quickly jumps out of the car, and starts to run down the alley. The shady gunman then fires a shot at Al with his pistol and it hits him in the leg. Al then falls to the ground. The shadowy man then walks over to Al, who is moaning in pain, Al looks up to see who is trying to kill him, and that is when we see that the shooter is none other than Frank Castle. Frank then fires the kill-shot and walks away.

END
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superbatspiderman - 8/28/2012, 3:07 PM
Decent writing but I think this would be a cool opening scene for a movie.
95 - 8/28/2012, 4:23 PM
lol. Can't say that I don't like it. Good opening. But I expected Marc to say: "You got more chances of winning the Powerball than running into him!" — and: "The name's Bond. James Bond." — when Al got shot.
BkGuy910 - 9/4/2012, 10:57 AM
Like the above poster said, this would make a great movie intro.

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