IronLeprechaun's The Flash Screenplay

<i>IronLeprechaun's</i> The Flash Screenplay

I'm just as excited as I am scared for this moment. The first full length movie script I've ever done, but I'm scared that people won't like it as much as I love it, hit the jump to read it! I hope you enjoy it. Script Length: 94 Pages

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By IronLeprechaun - 8/7/2013
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GliderMan - 8/7/2013, 5:40 PM
This is pretty good as I'm reading through
MrCBM56 - 8/7/2013, 6:14 PM
Read the first 20 pages, will finish it later. This is very good so far. Nice job. Thumbs up from me ;D
SomTingWong - 8/7/2013, 7:04 PM
just got done with my first script and I'm posting it on scribd on the 10th. It's always great to read some one else's hard work. I'll comment my opinion when i get done reading!
JDUKE25 - 8/7/2013, 7:33 PM
Love it when people take the time to do something like this. Good job. Do you any ideas on the suit design?
JoshuaDBr - 8/7/2013, 10:11 PM
I agree with JDUKE25, I love it when people take the time to do something like this! Great job, but it'll be a while before I finish reading it!
aresww3 - 8/8/2013, 3:25 AM
Dude I cannot wait to read this script. I may upload the first part of my WW story, please read. Flash is my 5th fav of all time so, defo give this a look.
aresww3 - 8/8/2013, 3:47 AM
Loving it, p. 3 "tears streaming down his face"
TheSonOfKrypton - 8/8/2013, 3:55 AM


Hell yeah.
Loved that Arnold quip.

IronLeprechaun - 8/8/2013, 4:10 AM
Thanks everyone for the positive comments! It means alot

@JDuke- I don't have a particular costume design, just the original Barry Allen Flash costume that we all know and love

@SonOfKrypton- Haha, yeah that's something I've always wanted the Flash to say to Captain Cold, so I just added it in there
SnapperCarr - 8/8/2013, 4:57 AM
I like what I'm reading so far.
Marxman12 - 8/8/2013, 1:21 PM
I love The Flash so I'm excited to check out your screenplay.
Kyos - 8/8/2013, 3:04 PM
Just skimmed over the first pages, will read more of this later on. Already impressed by the effort! :)
Tevii - 8/8/2013, 3:44 PM
Really looking forward to reading this.
Just finished my Robotech screenplay and a spec script for Arrow myself.
Doesnt it feel great?
tweeeeenkies3 - 8/8/2013, 4:30 PM
Great screenplay.
The story was really well done, and I loved the interaction between the characters. I really loved reading the Barry/Iris moments. I am a sucker for romance (Well written romance, that is).

I would advise you to read through it, because there are a few typing errors, along with a few grammatical mistakes. But, otherwise, fantastic job.

I can't wait to see what you do next!
ejkousc - 8/8/2013, 4:52 PM
Well by page 2 he has a character named Black Cop. That ought to go over well. Haha.
wookiefit76 - 8/8/2013, 4:56 PM
Not bad. Keep up the good work.
IronLeprechaun - 8/8/2013, 5:02 PM
@Ejkousc, lol, I didn't want to come up with a name for him... I just felt like saying he was black

Thanks to everyone for the positive comments, this is the first time one of my articles have made it to main page! I could not be happier
ddtyler23 - 8/8/2013, 5:32 PM
Only 24 pages in and I'm very impressed.good job so far man
flames809 - 8/8/2013, 8:10 PM
i email it to myself.. i will read it later. well tomorrow.
Ryden - 8/9/2013, 5:12 AM
It's a really good effort and I'm enjoying most of it. I do have a couple of pointers though for future reference, some of the dialogue can be a little OTT at times like "The party's here!" etc I would work on making the dialogue feel a bit more natural, realistic...other than though you've done a really good job. Well done!
HecticHector - 8/9/2013, 8:04 AM
"Up yours man"

"I'm not sure, has yours?"

Barry Allen would NEVER talk like that. He's not disrespectful nor has a bad mouth.
IronLeprechaun - 8/9/2013, 8:26 AM
First off, I don't ever remember him saying "Up yours" but I may be wrong, and the second comment that he said was more of a joke to get Captain Frye to back off of him because Frye would get on his case everyday... And he's not disrespectful in this and I'm pretty sure in the comics he's cussed before...
flames809 - 8/9/2013, 9:53 PM
actually good and good way to incorporate Barry story and the villain story and every other character into the mix. I also like how you made him kind of relatable to some people. My only advice is make some of the dialogue feel natural and develop the villain more. I mean he got out of prison and turned into the villain right away and just started rampaging the city for his revenge... and idk about anybody else but some of the dialog for the police captain was way to white lol. But good script it gave me ideas on a script im writing and i could deff see this as a big screen movie for the flash.
IronLeprechaun - 8/10/2013, 6:17 AM
I originally had a flashback written in that described what all went down that turned Snart into Captain Cold... But I decided to take it out because it was 5 pages long and extremely out of place, I know I would've gotten some comments saying that the flashback was out of place, even though it was interesting, it was random

And if I decide to do a Flash 2 script, I will make the character more developed :)
comiccow6 - 8/13/2013, 11:20 PM
Read through the first ten pages, and it's looking pretty awesome. Can I request some tips from you?
aresww3 - 8/20/2013, 1:14 AM
READ IT. IF YOUR STILL LOOKING AT THIS PAGE LET ME KNOW.

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