Peter Parker/Spider-Man (FAN FIC STORY)

Peter Parker/Spider-Man (FAN FIC STORY)

i remember a while ago i gave an article stating how i would make the pefect spider-man movie for me, well he it is in full, at least how i can describe it best.

i remember a while ago i gave an article stating how i would make the pefect spider-man movie for me, well he it is in full, at least how i can describe it best. now if anybody want to list what i can do to improve the story, please let me know

It opens like Incredible Hulk having his orgin play up in the intro, it then starts off right after uncle bens been shot and Peter is swinging around as Spider-Man, hes off swinging trying to find out what he should do with his life,since he really hasn't learned his lesson yet. Then you cut to Quentin Beck in hollywood played by jackie earle hayley, he sees spider-man on a tv thinking he can get rid of him since he is deemed as a menace. Anyway he comes to new york as mysterio and fights spider-man whom the latter defeats very easily, with plenty of quips of course.

Eventually Mysterio makes some kind of gas that can do a variety of things,sort of like the fear gas from batman begins he uses it to block spideys spider sense so he can discover it is Peter Parker. Then using medical records and such he discovers that his uncle is dead. So he lures Spider-Man into a trap, and while they are fighting he douses spider-man with the gas again, after that happens peter gets knocked unconscious. We then see a first person view of peter waking up and hearing a familiar voice from the side of his bed, and he looks and sees, its his Uncle Ben. The gas created an illusion where not only did Uncle Ben never die, but peter never got his powers.

As time goes on we see Uncle Ben and Peters relationship play out for about 40 minutes maybe, most of the second act. And then right before the climax we see peter cleaning out his attic as something fall out of a box he was carrying. A web shooter. He eventually puts two and two together to discover its all an illusion. This nearly drives him to the brink of insanity as he suits up and breaks out of the illusion coming after Mysterio, similar to how spider-man went after kraven in the 2003 series. He eventually finds Mysteio they have there final battle and Spider-MAn comes within inches of killing mysterio. But then he realises the lesson that his uncle ben taught him and thinks to himself uncle ben wouldnt want this. So he webs up mysterio gives him over to the police and swings off to fight crime another day.

Now please, list what you think, i love getting feedback like this.

Thanks for reading
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AmazingFantasy - 7/6/2012, 10:39 PM
comiccow6 - 7/7/2012, 4:00 AM
Awesome. I love Mysterio. He's in my top three Spidey villains. (Mysterio, Lizard, Electro) I would add dialogue to improve it though. Besides that, and it didn't really matter for this, pretty good.

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