THE DARK KNIGHT LEGACY --- Part One

My very own fan-fic sequel to THE DARK KNIGHT RISES. Batman is gone. Bane and The League of Shadows are eliminated. Who can protect Gotham now? And who might threaten it?

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By Asterisk - 8/8/2012
Needless to say, after my second viewing of the film, I had a few ideas. My writing style is a little more...unique, and the ending may seem a little rushed, but we have a while to go. Tell me what you think!

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RedNTheHood - 8/8/2012, 9:14 AM
Really cool! But Deathstroke's dialogue doesn't seem Deathstroke like.
95 - 8/8/2012, 9:55 AM
Pretty good. Very interesting start, wouldn't mind a fourth film like this. I'm glad you used Scribd, but I'd recommend using Screenplay Format.
Asterisk - 8/8/2012, 9:59 AM
@95

I probably will use that for the second chapter.
Hellsing - 8/8/2012, 11:44 AM
I like the idea's and the way this is going but you need to rework the end, I know you mentioned it was rushed but still need it rework that and some of the dialogue is off especially Death stroke he sounds way too much like Bane. He's an assassin therefore I believe his dialogue shouldn't be too showy or theatrical it should be minimal. But anyways good start man keep it up. I would definitely pay to see two of the best characters from the Nolan trilogy again Jim Gordon and John Blake.
AshleyWilliams - 8/8/2012, 3:20 PM
I like it so far but I don't think it's a good thing I read Deathstrokes lines in Banes voice. Besides that I like it.
Asterisk - 8/8/2012, 4:37 PM
Thanks for the feedback, guys! I'm glad you like it. I also find it very interesting that you're reading Deathstroke's lines in Bane's voice.
PJ - 8/9/2012, 3:08 PM
Me like. Me like.

nailbiter111 - 8/10/2012, 6:51 PM
coooooooooooooooooool
Asterisk - 8/10/2012, 6:58 PM
lol @nailbiter

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