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After I've opened the email with the supposed Dark Knight sequel poster, now another guy is sending me plot for Spider-man 4.
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SPIDER-MAN 4 INSIDER PLOT SUMMARY
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Got this from an intern friend involved in storyboarding. It could be (and very well may be) a very creative fabrication, but it sounds awesome! His internship would be kaput if this lead back to him, but I had to share his summary! It has the return of Norman Osborne, the Scorpion, the Lizard, Black Cat, a new Venom, Alistair Smythe, and sets up for Carnage...AND IT ALL MAKES PERFECT SENSE. It also fills in the holes of the past 3 movies. AND he tells me they're thinking of using Bruce Campbell as Scorpion/New Venom! Again,I don't know how legit this is he could just be messing with me, but it stands alone worth reading. Enjoy-

Spider-Man 4 The movie opens with the marriage of Peter and Mary Jane. The marriage is oddly normal. Peter is more concerned that his spider-sense is NOT going off than anything else, leaving him distant and distracted. This upsets Mary Jane. Aunt May has a dizzy spell, and nearly faints, but contains herself without anyone noticing. The two go on honeymoon without a qualm, but with underlying tension.


The next scene is one of Dr. Conners sequencing reptilian DNA codes in his office, late at night. He is startled when his sample of Peter's symbiote suddenly becomes violent, and breaks its casing in an attempt to escape. Dr. Conners quickly catches the specimen, and places it in a stronger container. We see the trapped symbiote hungrily advancing on the specimens it is placed next to, a large emperor scorpion, and a bearded dragon.



The next scene is a fundraiser event in which concerned citizens may make private donations in an effort to try and stop spider-man. They are concerned that a costumed, super-powered "hero" only taunts and encourages criminals to become super criminals, leaving a wake of destruction in their battle between ""good and evil." Specific incidences from the last three movies are recalled, as well as sum totals of property damage, and other villains are referenced, such as the Rhino and Mysterio. J. Jonah Jameson, in a show of bravado, turns the event into a media spectacle, making a large public donation to the cause. Peter is of course in attendance, photographing the event, and profiling his potential enemies. Peter is put on the spot by Jameson to join the effort against Spider-Man, which he declines. This leads to a heated argument, and a falling out, and Peter leaves the Bugle. The chairman of the event, Alistair Smythe, ask his people if Parker is the Bugle photographer famous for capturing Spider-Man on film. When the fact is confirmed, the commissioner tells his people to "keep an eye on the boy."



Leaving the fundraiser in anger, Peter decides to swing around the city as Spider-Man, to blow off some steam. At home, Mary Jane gets a call from Aunt May, asking for Peter to take her to the hospital. Mary Jane says Peter is out working, but rushes to Aunt May's house to take her to the hospital just in time. We cut back to Peter swinging over the city, late at night. He stops to listen to a portable police scanner, and hears that the silent alarm has been tripped at the museum. He swings his way over leaving his scanner and clothes tucked away in a web pack on the rooftop, to return to them later. As he leaves, we see the cell phone ringing in his coat pocket as a call from Mary Jane. He silently descends on a voluptuous criminal with long blonde hair in a skintight catsuit. Intrigued, he slowly lowers himself down to take a closer look, but the dinosaur skeleton his web was attached to collapses, allowing the Black Cat to escape, and creating another incident of damage. Spidey feels terrible about his "smooth move," but pursues the Black Cat through the museum. She always manages to escape to the shadows, but the two finally meet on the rooftop of the museum. The Black Cat seductively talks to Spider-Man, while Spidey does his best to remain composed. He says he has to take her in, and she says that she didn't steal anything, nor was she going to. He says she was trespassing, and she says he was, too, but that she didn't destroy any property in the process. As the sexual tension mounts, Spidey's phone from his webpack rings. This distracts him, he turns his head, and the Black Cat makes her escape. She leaves him a calling card with a kiss on it. Parker unmasks, sees numerous missed calls, and looks horrified as he checks his messages.



We now cut to the Black Cat running away on foot, and towards the campus of Peter's University. She unmasks, and throws an NYU hoodie on over costume. A close-up of her ankle reveals a very, very, damaged piece of the symbiote releasing itself from her boot on campus. Cut to Dr. Conners in his laboratory, feeling invigorated. He has finally isolated the regenerative element of reptilian dna, and injects it into himself in an attempt to regrow his lost limb. Nothing seems to happen. He is crestfallen, and leaves to go home. On his way, he runs into a very panicked Peter, running toward the NYU medical facility. Dr. Conners tries to share his success with Peter, but Peter blows past him to see Aunt May. Dr. Conners dejectedly walks home. Peter bursts into the hospital to find Aunt May and Mary Jane. Aunt May is unconscious, and Mary Jane is exhausted. Peter asks a flurry of questions, and we find out that Aunt May has been having heart trouble since Uncle Ben died, but has been keeping it a secret from Peter, to allow him to focus on school. Mary Jane talks with Peter about the attention that she needs, and convinces Peter that she has to move in with them while she's in this state, saying she doesn't have long. Peter tells her that he just walked out on his job with the Bugle, and Mary Jane is furious. "What about your family? My modeling is just taking off, but I can't support us yet! And what about Aunt May? After all she's done for you? Aren't you the one who's always talking about responsibility?" Peter is stunned, and tells her that he's sorry, and to go home and get some rest. He thanks her for taking care of Aunt May, and tells her what a wonderful wife she is. They make up, she leaves, and Peter stays the rest of the night with Aunt May. Peter tries to call Dr. Conners to apologize, but gets no answer. He leaves a message, saying he will come by the campus in the morning to visit him.



As Peter is leaving the message, we see a sleeping Dr. Conners with the start of a new limb. The next thing we hear is a dialogue between a familiar voice, and Mr. Smythe on the phone. They talk about the fundraiser, and the coming public auction of Oscorp. Smythe ensures the voice that with the combined donations of private donors, Mr. Jameson, Mr. Fisk, and the Smythe family fortune will be more than enough to buy out Oscorp. "Have you got a candidate?" the voice asks, "I need a spider-slayer…" Smythe responds that they have found ex-SEAL named Mac Gargan to be interested. "What about the boy?" the voice asks. "we'll be recruiting him tomorrow," Smythe replies. "Good." The voice says, and hangs up. The goblin mask is seen out of focus hanging on the wall in the background. Cut to Dr. Conner's biology class at NYU, where he is teaching with a fully regrown limb. He is lecturing on the human genome, and the possibilities of the future of medicine and humanity. The class is dismissed, with Dr. Conners ending on the note "with this great power, comes great possibility." As the class leaves, Felicia approaches Dr. Conners to talk to him about a grade on one of her papers. She sets up an after school appointment with her, and she leaves. As she walks away, she passes Peter Parker. Peter smiles at her awkwardly/creepily, she pauses, but dismisses the idea and moves on. Peter approaches Dr. Conners, saying "I was always taught that with great power comes great responsibility." Dr. Conners is quite pleased to see Peter, and the two retire to Dr. Conners private lab. The two discuss Dr. Conner's breakthrough as well as Aunt May's condition. The symbiote, having been dormant, becomes quite hostile when it senses Peter. It escapes again, freeing the scorpion in the process. It bonds to the scorpion, and then immediately spits out an empty exoskeleton. The two catch the symbiote, and then examine the scorpion's exoskeleton. Dr. Conners becomes very angry with Peter, and then quickly calms down and apologizes. They then turn their attention to the symbiote, and the exoskeleton. The symbiote is noticeably bigger. Dr. Conners states that the symbiote only wanted the "juice" that was inside. "Like a spider…" Peter says. As Peter leaves the campus, he is approached by Alistair Smythe, who has learned of Dr. Conners' success, through colleagues at the school. He wishes to regain functionality of his legs. He praises Dr. Conners, and it is revealed that Peter is a recent graduate student of his, and is also currently out of work. Smythe offers Peter a job on the spot. Peter is hesitant, recognizing him as the head of the anti-Spider-Man fundraiser. Dr. Conners emerges, and tells Peter he'll be praying for his Aunt. Peter then immediately takes the job, putting his family before his public image. Peter goes home to check on Aunt May, and tell Mary Jane the good news. When he approaches Aunt May, she is weak, but awake. He decides to omit that he lost his other job, and just tells her that he was offered a new position. She tells him that she is so proud of him, and she knows Uncle Ben would be, too. Peter asks her why she didn't tell him about her heart. She tells him that she knew how much he had on his plate, and wanted to make sure that he got himself though school without any distractions. She then goes on to say that she is so happy for him and Mary Jane, and that he couldn't be in better hands. She tells him that marriage is rough, especially at first, and talks about her and Uncle Ben's rocky beginnings. As they talk, Mary Jane finds the calling card left by the Black Cat in Peter's pocket as she does laundry. Infuriated, she immediately confronts Peter. He tries to explain, but has no answer good enough to appease her.



We cut to Smythe leaving Dr. Conners' office. Dr Conners has refused to sell his technology, telling them that it is brand new, and unsafe, and that "with great power comes great responsibility." Felicia approaches the classroom, as Smythe and his associates discuss how they can get the formula. Felicia, overhearing them, offers to obtain the secrets, for a fee. She secretly sees this as another opportunity to see Spider-Man, and sets her terms and price. They agree to pay her for the secrets, and they set a meeting time and place for the delivery. We cut to Peter's first day as a bioengineer for Smythecorp. He is praised for his ingenuity and work ethic, and starts to feel good about himself again. He talks to Mary Jane on his lunch, and finds out that Aunt May is in much better shape. Cut to the bowels of the research facility, where Mac Gargan is introduced, and is preparing to receive his first inoculation of the Oscorp Serum. Smythe suggests waiting for the data from Dr. Conners' lab to enhance the end result of the project, but "the voice" is impatient. "I don't know what that will do," he says, "and it could take years to find out. I know exactly what this will do. And this is exactly what I want." Gargan is given the gas, and soon after placed into a suit quite similar to the Goblin's original suit. This suit however, features no hoverboard, and instead features a large tail made of one of Doc Ock's tentacles, recovered from the bay. We now cut to Dr. Conners. He wakes up scaly, and dry. He is in a very fight or flight state of mind. He wants to approach his sleeping wife, but decides he can't. He calls Peter, and asks him to meet him at his lab. Peter, quite elated, leaves work to buy roses for Mary Jane and Aunt May. He tells them he'll be home for dinner, but is interrupted by Dr. Conners' frantic call. He tells his family that he will be home soon, but that he has to make a quick trip to see Dr. Conners first. Mary Jane is annoyed, but accepting. Peter dons the Spider-Man outfit, and makes his way to the campus by web to save time. We now cut to a fully finished Scorpion, the ultimate spider slayer. "The voice" talks to the Scorpion as he awakes, telling him about his new strengths and abilities. He is extremely pleased with his new suit and tail, and then asks, "how do I take it off?" The voice replies simply, "that is not an option." Gargan is enraged, and demands an explanation. The voice explains that he a lot of money and a lot of technology went into his suit, and that he has to be kept in check. He offers to release him out of the suit only after spider-man is killed, and once the information from Dr. Conners' lab is obtained. "you," the voice says," are now a Spider-Slayer, property of Smythecorp." He is informed that another has been sent to retrieve the data, but is advised, "I would get it myself if I were you."




We now see the Black Cat attempting to break into Dr. Conners' lab. She does, and obtains the data just as spider-man arrives. "This is a little more than just trespassing," Spidey says. He demands that she returns the data, but tells her that he won't turn her in if she does. She playfully says, "you'll have to catch me first," and takes off. Just as the chase begins, the Lizard emerges in full form, indiscriminately attacking the Black Cat, injuring her. An epic fight ensues between Spidey and the Lizard, as Spider-Man tries to lead the Lizard away from the campus. The fight is fierce, and ends in the sewers, where Spider-Man loses the Lizard. He leaves immediately to try to catch Black Cat. We cut to her on foot, disc in hand, trying to reach the meeting place. She realizes Smythe and his men know her true identity and she may be in over her head.As she hobbles along, she is curtailed by the Scorpion, who wants to deliver the data himself. Spider-Man catches up to them just in time to try to obtain the data for himself. Another massive fight ensues, this time with Spidey also trying to protect the Black Cat while trying to retrieve Dr. Conners' data. He realizes that the only way to try and help Dr. Conners is to analyze the data for himself. Spidey escapes with the data, and with the Black Cat, to the fury of the Scorpion. In a Goblin-like rage, he vows revenge on everyone, from Smythe, to Jameson, to Spider-Man. We see Spider-man swinging away with the injured Black Cat towards the hospital, and she flirts with him the whole way there. When they get to the hospital, she thanks him for being her hero, and lifts his mask to kiss him. He hesitates, but kisses her back, passionately. He pulls his mask down, and takes off for home. When he arrives home, Mary Jane is cleaning up dinner, and Aunt May is already asleep. She is mildly upset with him, but reminds him that she knew what she was getting into when she married him. She kisses him, but is very quickly upset when she tastes the Black Cat's lipstick on his lips. She realizes that it's the same shade from the calling card, and furiously comes back at Peter, wiping his lips, and then showing him the color on the tissue, and the color on the card. Without saying a word, she slaps him across the face, marches upstairs, and locks the door behind her. Devastated, Peter sits down at his computer with Dr. Conners' data, and spends all night analyzing it.



He discovers that not only has Dr. Conners' body mutated, but that he is now controlled by his "reptile brain," making him a very complicated enemy. This means he has no motivation outside of those a reptile might have, making him extremely hard to fight, or predict. He also wishes no harm on Dr. Conners, and wishes only to return him to his human state. He wonders why he himself didn't mutate, and decides to analyze his own DNA. At work the next day, Peter discovers that an element of the Oscorp serum was what prevented the arachnid takeover of his own DNA, and realizes that to save his friend, he must track down whatever is left of Oscorp, to isolate the serum. He notes he is much happier to be a "spider-man" than a "man-spider." He stops by Harry and Norman's grave to reflect, on his way home from work, and passes by the Bugle on his way home. As he looks over at the Bugle, his spider-sense tingles, and he sees a confrontation happening upstairs. The Scorpion is confronting J. Jonah Jameson over his donation to the foundation that was responsible for his suit. Jameson says he didn't know they would use it to make "more freaks," and the Scorpion chastises him for just throwing money at problems and expecting a solution. Spider-Man intervenes to Jameson's disgust, and takes the fight with the Scorpion out to the street. We now see the Scorpion in full stride, using his prehensile tail and immense strength to chase spider-man in much the same way a Gibbon would swing through trees. He fires "goblin bombs" from his suit at spider-man, causing lots of destruction. Jameson ponders the destruction, wondering how many people would be killed instead of him in the rubble and aftermath. He tells the paper to run a story condemning the anti-spider man fundraiser, with a headline reading "Freak Factory!" He then tells them to get Parker on the phone, because he was "the only one around here that could ever get a half-decent picture of that abomination." Spider-man continues to fight the Scorpion, and maintain damage control, in a fight leading back to the Globe on top of the Bugle. As they fight, Spider-Man recognizes the armor and tail as remnants of the Green Goblin and Doc Ock. The Scorpion is obviously stronger than Spider-Man, but Spider-Man is able to retain his balance on top of the globe, while the Scorpion is not. The Scorpion falls a great distance, damaging his tail, but he escapes.


Peter has an epiphany, realizing that there is a tie between the anti-Spider-Man coalition, and Oscorp. He digs further, and realizes that the very company he works for has deep connections to Oscorp. He returns to his job as Spider-Man to investigate, where he comes across the lab that created the Goblins, Doc Ock, and the Scorpion. He is confronted by none other than Norman Osbourne! He explains that the serum didn't let him die, and that it took a long time for him to heal, but that he is alive. He shows spider-man the scars he has from the glider as proof of his claim, and talks to him about Harry. He says that he will have his revenge for everything he's done to him, on everyone he loves, no matter how long it takes, because he can't die. This sends Spider-Man into a frenzy. He destroys as much of the lab as he can after obtaining a sample of the Oscorp serum, and leaves Norman for dead. The Scorpion returns to the lab to find a half-dead Norman Osbourne, not realizing that he was "the voice," he has sworn vengeance against. He restocks on bombs, and leaves to get a new copy of Dr. Conners' data from his lab. As the Scorpion arrives at the lab, he blows a hole in the side of the building with a bomb, and advances inside. We see the damaged piece of symbiote emerge behind him in the blast hole. As the Scorpion enters the building to take the computer, the Lizard savagely attacks him. A large fight ensues in the lab, brutal on both sides. During the fight, the specimen of the symbiote is released, which finds and re-bonds with the damaged piece of the symbiote. The symbiote is careful to avoid the flames, but with the addition of the damaged portion of the symbiote, requires a host immediately. It braves the flames to find the Lizard and the Scorpion viciously fighting inside. The symbiote finally bonds to the Scorpion. As it bonds to him, it pries off his scorpion suit, wanting only the host body inside. The newly formed Venom is hit with the memories of both Eddie Brock and Peter Parker, as a new entity entirely. The symbiote was in such a desperate, weakened state, that it bonded inseparably from Gargan, making no distinction between host and symbiote. It rushes to escape the flames, the Lizard close behind. Venom now has even greater strength than the Lizard, and the fight starts to lose balance, with Venom winning, when Spider-Man appears. Just as he is about to join the fight, Black Cat appears. Spider-Man tells her to stay out of it, but she refuses. He tells her he doesn't want to have to protect her again, and she says with a wink that she can handle herself. She jumps down to try to retrieve the computer discarded by Gargan, and is immediately injured again. Spider-Man swoops down to get her to safety, and then tries to get the Lizard away from Venom. Venom brutalizes the Lizard, leaving him critically injured. He is about to finish the job, when Spider-Man blindsides him. This thrills Venom, and he takes off after Spider-Man. The injured Lizard slinks back into the sewers, and the Black Cat and the computer are gone. An amazing fight ensues between Venom and Spider-Man as they swing through the buildings of New York. As they fight, Spider-Man leads them back towards the blazing remnants of Oscorp, which is continually rattled by explosions. Spider-Man leads him in through the flames, knowing that the new symbiote can't withstand the flames. Venom desperately tries to pursue him, despite the flames, and is weakened to the point that the symbiote retracts into his body. Spider-Man flees to try and find the Lizard before it's too late to help him. When he returns to the campus, the Black Cat is waiting to direct him down the sewers, and lead him the Lizard. When Spider-Man finds the Lizard, he half-heartedly tries to fight Spidey, eventually collapsing. Spider-Man administers a trace amount of the Oscorp serum to the Lizard. He jumps up with a start, but the Black Cat knocks him out with a well-aimed kick to the face. Spider-Man thanks her for help. She asks when she'll see him again, and comes in to kiss him. He retracts, saying he can't. She desperately tries to convince him that superheroes can date, but he pulls off one of his gloves, showing a wedding ring. Black Cat is quite taken aback, not realizing that under his costume he was a normal man with a normal life. As things are put into perspective for her, she is ashamed, and disappears. Spider-Man looks over at the Lizard, who has now returned to being Dr. Conners, minus his limb. He brings Dr. Conners to the hospital. Before they enter, he changes into his street clothes. A half-conscious Dr. Conners sees Peter's face, and laughs to himself in a daze, saying "brilliant, but lazy…" before passing out again.



As he's leaving the hospital, he is surprised to see Mary Jane in the waiting room, teary eyed and distraught. They immediately embrace, Mary Jane tells him that Aunt May collapsed, and that she doesn't have much time. She tells him what room she's in, and to go say goodbye. Peter sees Aunt May, barely conscious, and holds her hand. He tells her how much he loves her, and thanks her for everything he's done. He can't believe he's saying goodbye, and asks her if she can even hear him. "Of course I can," she weakly replies. He smiles, and hugs her, tears streaming down his face. He apologizes to her for not being there for her as much as he should have, and that he wants to tell her something very important. She clutches his hand, and says "Peter…I already know. And Uncle Ben would be so proud. We are both so proud of you…Spider-Man…" She closes her eyes, and her heart monitor flat-lines. We are now at Aunt May's funeral. It is very small, and very heartfelt. Peter tells a story about Aunt May from when he was a little boy, but bursts into tears before he can finish. Afterward, Jameson approaches Peter to apologize for their falling out. He tells Peter that if he ever tells anyone, he's fired. Peter asks if that means he has his job back. Jameson says as far as he's concerned, Parker took a sabbatical, due to the ill health of his Aunt. Peter smiles, and thanks him. Jameson reminds Peter that if anyone finds out about this act of compassion, he's fired. After the service, Peter walks through the graveyard, noting Ben and May Parker, as well as Norman and Harry Osbourne. Mary Jane approaches him to comfort him. "He's not in there, MJ," he says. "Who's not in where?" Mary Jane asks. "Norman Osbourne," he says. "Norman Osbourne is not in that grave." We now cut to a secret facility, where Osbourne and Smythe are discussing their future plans. They make mention of the fact that Parker's research on his own DNA, and the link between the Oscorp serum and mutation suppression are all stored on their company computer. They also note how Gargan was arrested and blamed for the fires at Smythecorp, and has been sent to a maximum security prison. They both agree that how he got out of his suit will always be a mystery. The final scene in the movie takes place at Ravencroft Asylum, where Gargan is being placed in a cell. He is locked up, his door shuts, displaying his name. As the camera pans away from his door, we see that the name on the cell next to his is Cletus Kasady. Credits-


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It's a good read but Nah! I don't think this is what the next movie will be.
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90 Comments

A very nice fan fiction, though a little busy for my taste. Less villains more substance.
thwhtGuardian - 10/29/2009, 11:49 PM
Not real.
ClintEastwood - 10/30/2009, 12:05 AM
I thought having too many villains in 3 was the problem....
TheUnknown - 10/30/2009, 12:36 AM
as much as i want to see mac venom, it shouldnt happen like this...with that many ppl being introduced there is no room for the growht of the characters and clearly displayed in 3
13ulletpr00f17 - 10/30/2009, 12:53 AM
Since your Batman 3 viral posters were obviouse fakes and this as well i sudjest you change your email address lol :P
teabag - 10/30/2009, 3:35 AM
Ok guys! let's see the hands who wrote this?
access - 10/30/2009, 4:11 AM
dude take this shit and get out of here. it is soo fake. i did not even read it. i dont need to. this article would have been removed soooo quickly if it was real. that shit poster looks fake as hell too.
grif - 10/30/2009, 4:52 AM
No one sends me nothing lol, though i should really read my e-mail once a month!!! : D
LEEE777 - 10/30/2009, 5:53 AM
Busy? No, this is a cluster f**k of epic proportion. One villain for the movie, and another that sets up the fifth movie.
ASSASSIN666 - 10/30/2009, 6:03 AM
@ the unknown:

thats why this isn't the real script.
captain0vell - 10/30/2009, 6:32 AM
This script is horrible! The return of Norman Osborn is a bad idea! Introducing the Black Cat is a bad idea! However, putting Smythe in a movie is very interesting...
Bud - 10/30/2009, 6:57 AM
Great read, but I doubt it is real. It just feels like there a little too much going on.
BmanHall - 10/30/2009, 7:29 AM
i liked it...but instead of norman osborn being "The Voice" it should have been The Kingpin. how awesome would that be
BCiddy - 10/30/2009, 7:39 AM
There are some cool IDEAS in this...but it is definitely too busy and fake.
Bamf7 - 10/30/2009, 8:28 AM
I like the story but the last movie was too many villians. Maybe the director can split up the storylines to make it separate movies by itself. One movie leading to the other because it might be morre interesting that way. Plus, they can have a cameo of the HULK at the end of the movie. You know I had to throw that in! HULK SMASH!!!!
THULK - 10/30/2009, 8:34 AM
No question that this is fake.. but kudos to whoever thought this up.
Steelix - 10/30/2009, 9:16 AM
Fake as hell and way too messy to be a 2hr movie. It had some decent ideas though..!
joshw24 - 10/30/2009, 11:38 AM
The one idea from it I actually really liked (and admit I am shocked I liked it) was if Scorpion DOES get put in a movie, that's a good idea for his tail. I always thought it would be pretty hard to explain the technology of controlling a tail...but, Doc Ock has already been explained, so that was kind of a unique take on it that could work.
Bamf7 - 10/30/2009, 11:45 AM
You know what's a good but fake story too??? HAWK'S X-Men story!!! You guys should check it out. He actually fessed up in saying it was fan fic though, so it's not on "main"... it's in "Fan Fic".
Shaman - 10/30/2009, 12:02 PM
@Shaman. Thanks man, glad you liked it!

But yeah, this is fake. One of the reasons it is is because of teh spelling of Osborn's name. They spelt it Osbourne, but in the film it was Osborn.
THEHAWK - 10/30/2009, 12:35 PM
Access, you really need to stop opening random e-mails haha! I swear your computer will end up with the plague.
Stumblin - 10/30/2009, 12:47 PM
Or Herpes.
THEHAWK - 10/30/2009, 12:59 PM
Seems pretty bad ass, buuut like everyone so far has said, so many villians was the problem with Spidy 3. I like the idea of Black cat, and Lizard, but its to packed. I hope the actual script has epic moments such as.
SpiderGuy - 10/30/2009, 1:00 PM
fantastic scenario - and this would be a great evolution building off of Spider 3 - but if Raimi is telling the truth, he won't be using this many villians. if it ends up being true I won't be depressed either though - good read man.
Keven - 10/30/2009, 1:05 PM
Well this is fake if it wasn't Sony would of yanked it by now.

Spiderman 4 will have the Vulture as the villain and hopefully the lizard. If you remember the vulture was forced out of 3 to put venom in so I'm sure it was part of the deal to bring Raimi back to have him in the movie.

New to the board hello all.
magnumsnake - 10/30/2009, 1:05 PM
also - there were some flaws - and this feels like a 4 hour movie. lol. But didn't Kurt Conners have both his arms in the previous movies? it doesn't explain it here how he would lose his arm. maybe I'm just missing something.
Keven - 10/30/2009, 1:07 PM
Had the right idea but scrwed it up, split this into two movies and its not as bad, too much going on and Kraven is nessasary if Lizard's gonna be in the film, no second Venom because Raimi hates Venom and doesn't know how to work the character, I'm not opposed to a Goblin ressurection but for the last ever movie of this current franchise, we've had two goblins so far, a third one right after harry would be stupid. This is fake.
Ryden - 10/30/2009, 1:13 PM
I liked it. Take out black cat and the random appearance of Wilson Fisk, and it could be cool. I like the way venom's brought back in. Oh well
antz1104 - 10/30/2009, 1:22 PM
VULTURE all these other characters will be saved for 5 and 6 when Raimi is off the franchise.

Wilson Fisk rights are with fox from Daredevil, spiderman is sony.
magnumsnake - 10/30/2009, 1:41 PM
First off you don't need to spend a lot of time building up a characters origin in a movie called spiderman except for spidermans. Character build up of Venom would be done in it's own venom/ carnage spin off movie. This is exactly how I've been saying it's gonna happen. Didn't like the Black cat being in it though. But the reference to Doc Oc leaves something for the 5th movie. Oscorp having 1 of his tenticles means they probably have the rest ofhis body somewhere. It builds up to the 5th movie and final Sinister 6 movie, which leads into the Avengers 2 movie.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 2:03 PM
Dr Conners character has been built up a little over the last 2 movies.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 2:06 PM
Yeah!!! I think Sam will do this not by reading this but it makes so much sense how all those characters are connected Green Goblin,Hob Goblin,Dock ock,Scorpion,Vulture,and bringing back venom doesn't necessarily have to be gargan as long as there's a host venom being able to recreate himself means he can bring back eddie and the villans i just named are all mechanics there are there for the same thing yeah i agree with the opening of emails before that computer sex juice falls on you.
Weiner123 - 10/30/2009, 2:23 PM
Joker origin was never shown in the dark knight, he just shows up one day with a crew robbing a bank and then is strategically popping up creating chaos.
It's a movie about Spiderman. All you need is basis of the villians. I'd like it to show how mac Gargan was in the 2 or 3 previous movies so it can tie those together and make you say ahh that makes sense. Maybe have Norman not revealed til the end. Have Mary Jane and Spiderman not be married but still on a break. I think we all deserve a break from that annoying relationship. His love interest should be Gwen Stacey. Have the Green Goblin pop up in the end, battle Spiderman and Gwen gets killed.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 2:25 PM
I think spiderman franchise is done, they ruined it with the last movie, just let it go.
KalEl13 - 10/30/2009, 2:36 PM
that happern when G goblin didn't kill Gwen
Weiner123 - 10/30/2009, 2:41 PM
The Scientist Dr Farley Stillwell is the one who creates the Scorpion not the Alistair Smythe.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 2:45 PM
pretty cool but probably fake
Denn1s - 10/30/2009, 2:54 PM
this is just BS. he posted that silliness about the TDK sequel poster with the riddler...that mysteriously got sent to his email...no this. come one, dude
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 2:56 PM
The death of Gwen Stacey is one of the biggest impact storylines of spidermans life, it's up there with Uncle Bens death. It should have been in the first film, but since peter and Mary Jane are on a break let it happen now. But kill her with the return of the Goblin near the end.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 2:57 PM
so uh, isn't there a rule about posting fake articles as real?
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 2:58 PM
Thats interesting story. Too much going on though. Better than the Star Trek fan fiction.
Number21 - 10/30/2009, 3:00 PM
@Keven Dr Conners didn't have both arms in the others movies.

It was a good read but just had to many villians.
Spike1980 - 10/30/2009, 3:03 PM
Why was this presented as something that could be possibly real? How stupid do you think we are?
MarkV - 10/30/2009, 3:07 PM
How did this end up main anyway, @Access-You need to give details, prove something to show that you're not just making it up. I mean how could you just randomly stumble across these things, it doesn't make sense, I guarentee you'll do something similar to this soon.
Ryden - 10/30/2009, 3:17 PM
Not bad for fan-fiction.
gtrman - 10/30/2009, 3:20 PM
@access

I really liked this story, man. There are too many villains, but the ideas about scorpion's creation and Mac as Venom were really cool.

I think the idea of Norman coming back is really cool. I also like the end leading to Carnage, and I think this definitely sets up a future movie involving the sinister six.

...very good story.
Macksimus - 10/30/2009, 3:27 PM
great read but it sounds like a 4 hour movie , i do like the idea of Smythe ... could be Bruce Cambells character , no ?!
billyhaup54 - 10/30/2009, 3:36 PM
@ billyhaup

it COULD be...if this were real
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 3:48 PM
Look!

Just have Lizard and Kraven the Hunter as the Prime Villains and then have Mystero as a Side villain.

Then...resurrect Osborn at the near end of the Movie to set up SpiderMan 5.

In Spiderman 5.... The Opening Villian can be Scorpian and tell his short Story of him being traped in that suit and blaming JJ. You then have Norman work his way back as the Green Goblin and form the Sinster Six to go after SpiderMan in Revenge for his death and his Son's.

That way...you can have the excuese to have Multiple Villans.

They can have the Scorpian join up with Goblin, As well as Mysterio, bring back Doc Oc, Introduce the Shocker, and maybe the Vulture to make #6.

By doing that...it will allow them to cast Black Cat who should fight against and team up with Spidey to help him against all those Villains.

The Beauty in that is...Less time for us to look at Freaking DUNSTS Half the movie and get Peter another Girl with Felicia aka. Black Cat.


NubaX - 10/30/2009, 3:50 PM
@ gothamknights

huh? spiderman can't be in an avengers movie, first of all. and oscorp having one of doc ock's tentacles doesn't mean they would have his body. cyberdyne had a terminator hand, but does that mean they have the rest of the body? and they've said that the venom movie won't have anything to do with the spidey movies.
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 3:51 PM
First of all, if they have 1 of Doc Oc's tentacles then they have his entire body, because he went down to the bottom of the lake fully intact.

2nd, why can't Spiderman be in an Avengers movie? He's been part of the Avengers comicbooks.

3rd, Venom has to have some context to Spiderman even if Spiderman isn't in the movie. It has it's characteristics because of being the first host, right?
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 4:10 PM
Don't make the the Black cat in this movie but introduce felicia's character as a Dr Conners lab assistant.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 4:15 PM
@ gothamknights

marvel studios doesn't own the rights to spiderman, meaning marvel studios can not use spidey in any movies unless they buy the rights back from sony.

the venom symbiote isn't the way it is because pete was the first host, thats just how the symbiote is. there have been a LOT of symbiotes in the past and they all have the same powers/weaknesses. and yes, they have said that the venom movie will not draw from the spidey movies. thats not to say that spidey won't be mentioned, but from what we've heard so far, the venom movie will not have anything to do with the spiderman films.
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 4:24 PM
They couldd have a small part with Dr Miles Warren a colleague and competitve Biology professor with Dr Connors. Just a small role to let us know he's there at the beginning and then dont have him again until Gwen's funeral.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 4:31 PM
Then how did they have Venom in the Spiderman movie if they dont have those rights?
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 4:34 PM
sony has the venom rights too. i said SPIDERMAN couldn't be in an AVENGERS movie.
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 4:43 PM
sony has the rights for spidey and spidey-related characters. just like fox owns the rights for x-men and x-men related characters. marvel studios can't use xmen characters either. which is why we'll never see wolverine in an avengers movie, either. the only way we'd see that is if marvel bought those rights back. but i personally don't think spidey or wolverine should be anywhere near an avengers movie.
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 4:46 PM
This sounds a little too close to real. It actually reads like a Hollywood script. Scary. Hopefully this a rejected first draft.
Betty - 10/30/2009, 5:00 PM
as much as you want to give the credit to me (or blame me) on making this guys. I really can't write like this (honestly I've not read the whole thing, I'm lazy like that). And it's easy to send me email guys, because my email is posted on the top left corner of my fanpage "contact me" portion.

and I know that this story (and the dark knight poster, though it took me sometime to realize but you guys made very very good points) are fake. If you could read my title there's a hint of sarcasm there.

I'm really thinking that this story came from some of you guys, and you just want people to hear reactions on what you did. So, I'm posting it here - if you like some suspects go to the fanfic area and look for people who write stories. I don't but I envy those who can... so even if this is fake... I'll say kudos to them... because writing this is still talent.

To those of you guys who are concerned with me opening my email, thanks for your concern. But I might not stop anytime soon, because it's just like halloween you either get tricks or treats.

To those who are busting my chops about why this got main page, I don't know I'm not even sure myself why it got main. Though you have to consider main page is not the NEWS section, it's the WHAT's NEW section.

Thank you guys... I appreciate all the opinions thrown out... again KUDOS to the writer whoever you are... next time post it yourself :)
access - 10/30/2009, 5:18 PM
@CornDogBurgler

I understand. But by the year they make Avengers 2 and Spiderman 6, everything will be owned by Disney anyway. LOL!
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 5:30 PM
But of coarse the world is ending Dec. 2012 anyway.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 5:41 PM
@ gothamknight

i hope your right! i hope disney does buy those rights back, then we can get a marvel produced xmen! schaaaaawiiiiiiiiinnnnnnngggggggg!

lol, we just have to get past 2012, lol
CorndogBurglar - 10/30/2009, 5:50 PM
I liked this idea for the film way better then the last 3 people have to understand that you can have more then 2 villains and make it work I would love to see a film with the sinister 6 ect the more mystery behind the characters the better villains they end up being. Look at the most badass character in Starwars Boba Fett! so mysterious and awesome looking in the empire/jedi then when the new films came around they made him have such a lame origin it doesn't even feel like the same character that can also be said for Vader!
BossWalsh - 10/30/2009, 7:05 PM
The problem of Spiderman 3 was not the villains, it was the story, but this one exagerated with the number,was that the sinister 6,damn there was too much villains, I think its too soon for Peter and Mary to marry, I like the idea of Eddie been dead but not Venon(symbiote), Black Cat would be interested, for the next movie, Iliked the idea of people desliking the idea of Super heros, bringing too much chaos
brazilianbatman - 10/30/2009, 7:27 PM
WOW! I HOPE THATS EXACTLY HOW IT GOES!!!! NORMAN OSBOURNE SHOULD TOTALLY COME BACK BECAUSE HE TOTALLY CAME BACK IN THE COMICS AND NOW HE RUNS EVERYTHING! I THOUGHT THIS STORY TIED EVERYTHING TOGETHER VERY WELL EVEN DOWN TO THE DOC OCK ARM FOR SCORPIONS TAIL! AMAZING! AND NOW IM DYIN TO SEE BLACK CAT ON THE BIG SCREEN!!!!!! TWO THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!!!!
Makiveli21 - 10/30/2009, 8:18 PM
I'll just say fake just because you post it in here saying this is true. And besides, this isn't how it's suppose to be. And makiveli, if you really wants this to happen..make it yourself, cuz' there ain't gonna be any Dark Reign stuff happening in the movies any time soon.
FifthSun - 10/30/2009, 9:14 PM
hey dude next time your in NY i have a bridge i want to sell you
darthstern - 10/30/2009, 9:31 PM
fail.
DarthMulder - 10/30/2009, 10:13 PM
WOW, what a piece of crap! I mean, I've seen some crappy crap before, but that was some of the crappiest. It's as if a big piece of crap somehow crapped out an even bigger piece or crap defying physics in the process.

Oh hey look, somebody just e-mailed ME the new Superman story outline:
Superman flies, then runs into Lex Luthor who does some stuff. Then he turns around and runs into Brainiac who does some stuff. Then he looks over and sees Bizarro doing stuff. Then he goes home and finds Lois doing stuff. Then on TV Metallo is doing stuff. Next thing you know Mr. Mxyzptlk is doing things. After that Lex does another thing. Next Darkseid is there for some reason. Finally Doomsday shows up and, guess what? Yep. He does stuff.

THE END

What a tour de force!
gibbyblaylock - 10/30/2009, 10:37 PM
For real I've actually seen that crap happen before, and believe me from personal experience all I can say is Fissure!
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 10:49 PM
That Superman script might actually be better than the first 5 movies. They all appear to be doing something. Verygood script. Come on Gibby, do tell your secret source.
GOTHAMknights2012 - 10/30/2009, 10:52 PM
@CorndogBurgler: i think it would be pretty hard to pull off a venom movie without spidey as his origins are focused on his hatred of spider-man, i just hope if we see spidey at all in the venom movie it will only be like a flashback or something.
Steelix - 10/30/2009, 11:26 PM
so what we get in our email is considered news now? im gonna start posting all the porn i get then.
CaptainAmerica - 10/30/2009, 11:32 PM
Keven@ and spike@ they only gone wrong on the arm. In the comics he miss the other one :-D
MisterFixit - 10/31/2009, 6:06 AM
this not a comic book, its a movie, the intention is entertain a large group of audience, bring people from the dead would kill the franchise definitely, it would be to stupid
brazilianbatman - 10/31/2009, 6:51 AM
@ brazilianbatman

for once i agree with you!

@ captain america

LMAO!!!!!!!

@ steelix

yeah they'll mention him, but he won't have anthing to do with anything in the movie. like you said, i don't think they can have a venom movie without at least mentioning how much he hates spidey/pete. but its been reported that the events from spidey 3 won't carry over to the venom movie. which is fine by me, since they royally screwed venom in that
CorndogBurglar - 10/31/2009, 7:27 AM
@cap I for one is looking forward on your post :)
access - 10/31/2009, 8:46 AM
Bullshit story.
satanors - 10/31/2009, 11:21 AM
@magnumsnake- sick avatar.. GO PHILLIES!

also, this is obviously bullshit. Raimi said its going to be a PETER PARKER story. Not 1000000000 villians
fotc - 10/31/2009, 12:12 PM
Very creative and interesting script yet totally fake the main reasons are because of the amount of villains why not chuck in spiderboy and also there were way too many fight scenes not that i mind id love i if spiderman was mainly comprised of fights but alass the day will never arise. If only the makers of spiderman took some ideas from here.
Wolverine775 - 10/31/2009, 4:00 PM
Guys go easy on Access. I've gotten a dozen of e-mails of fake stuff lke this back in the day, and it got me in deep shit on here too. I posted a fake article abotu the next Spidey fillming at a power plant in Ireland, yeah Ireland. But I thougth it was a legit source,until the guy who wrote the article a few months earlier emailed me and told me it was an old April Fool's prank. So it happens.
THEHAWK - 10/31/2009, 6:45 PM
Actually I like the thought of Gargan as Scorpion. Isay leave out Norman, no Black Cat, and no Smythe. Have Stillwell create the Scorpion suit and the Rhino suit. Intro Toomes take control of Oscorp. Have a 5-8 minute fight scene with Spidey and Rhino towards the beginning of the movie. Then build the relationship between Connors and Parker and intro Gargan. Now have a tie between Gargan and Jameson. Even have Spidey save Jameson in the first fight with Scorpion. And have Jameson still criticize him. still have scenes with Aunt May and Mary Jane. Before a dinner date with MJ he captures a serial killer named Kletus Casadey before the police can use the specially designed "Scorpion" suit JJ talks Gargan into the surgery. throughout the movie you see the inner struggle of Connors in his decision to take the serum to regrow his arm. during the Gargan surgery a storm blows in while lineman are working on power lines. During the data transfer, lightning strikes the lineman, and short circuits the transformer. Killing the power to the city. It disrupts all the data transfer, leaving Gargan with the strength and agility and pain,but not much control. It would set up good fight scenes, intro new characters. Develop Connors very well. And would set up possible villains. And the Venom spinoff
squirt - 10/31/2009, 7:43 PM
Thanks @TheHawk :)
access - 10/31/2009, 10:07 PM
@ squirt

thats too much and too convoluted. to explain all of that and for those characters it would take 3 movies, lol
CorndogBurglar - 11/1/2009, 1:05 PM
I thought that was great. The Black Cat may not need to be there but she does add a bit of drama with MJ, who seems delightfully absent from most of the script. This would make a nice 2.5 hour movie, and the abundance of characters seems to work in the way that it did for the Dark Knight.
Ryguy88 - 11/1/2009, 1:32 PM
Why is everyone against having more than one villain?? Spiderman 3 sucked but the Dark Knight had 4 or 5 villains. It can work if each character has a purpose. Who wants a boring regurgitation of Spiderman 1 and 2?
Ryguy88 - 11/1/2009, 1:36 PM
No, damn it! Mary Jane is just a whiny bitch again! And personally, I HATE the Scorpion-Venom thing. I don't know why he's considered a good substitution. Also, if Sam Raimi barely wanted to do the original Venom in the first place, what makes us think that he'll want to do that piece of shit?

AND WHAT ABOUT PETER'S PARENTS? For God sakes, if Norman's gonna come back, have him get ahold of his parents and keep them hostage! No, no, no, no, this is pure crap. I'm sorry. I really, really, really hope that this isn't the plot.

Peter's parents, Peter's parents, Peter's parents! Frick!
Chris McLellan - 11/1/2009, 2:53 PM
Aren't Peter's parents dead?? And the Venom thing is kinda gay and pointless, but the rest of the story seems good.
Ryguy88 - 11/2/2009, 1:47 PM
[frick] everyone who says that to many villians was the problem in 3 the only problem was to much crying and topher grace as venom this article is good 3 was good 4.5 stars out of 5
MrAnonymous - 11/2/2009, 5:33 PM
The detailing in this is nice, but I just don't see this as being real. This only compounds the problems of the last movie, with too many villains, and too many characters fighting for screen time. Also, Raimi would not have come back for another film is he was being forced to do more symbiotes. He only added Venom in the last film because the studio forced him to do so.

And Mr. A, you have a fine point about there being too much crying in the last film, but please allow me to explain the problem with too many villains in a comic film. New characters require time to do their backstory to bring the non-comic reading audience up to speed on who they are and their motivations. Remember, these movies are made for people who don't read comics, not us. Also, when these characters are played by known actors, they want face time on screen, and they want more lines. This leads to a whole host of problems. One villain keeps things simple, and allows the story to really develop him/her as a character.
comicb00kguy - 11/20/2009, 10:34 AM

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