Anthony Stark Presents: TMNT: Origins; Chapter 1

Hey all, I just started a possible script for our favorite heroes in a half shell, and before I keep going, I want to give you all chapter 1, and see what you guys think. So whether you like it or not, just let me know after the jump!

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By anthonyEstark - 3/22/2014
TMNT: Origins Chapter 1 by anthonyEstark

 




            And as a bonus... My latest drawing!


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BatManHeisenberg - 3/22/2014, 10:34 AM
A job well done.
BatManHeisenberg - 3/22/2014, 10:34 AM
Glad I could help with your scribd shiz, yo!
anthonyEstark - 3/22/2014, 10:37 AM
Yeah, thanks BatManHeisenberg
BatManHeisenberg - 3/22/2014, 10:57 AM
No problemo, amigo. Anytime.
DrunkenNukem - 3/22/2014, 11:45 AM
Lol ..That was cool
DEVLIN712 - 3/22/2014, 11:45 AM
Great drawing! Looking forward to chapter 2
Doopie - 3/22/2014, 5:43 PM
what? no mention of pizza!?!

bring on the foot!
anthonyEstark - 3/22/2014, 6:41 PM
Thanks for all your support guys, I'll try to soon work on a chapter 2.
Osborn - 3/23/2014, 6:03 AM
Is that a fanfiction? I mean the writing is okay but it's the exact origin from the 2012 show!
I don't say that's a bad origin at all but every new iteration of the characters gave us a new origin story with at least some change (Hamato Yoshi being the one to buy the turtles in the 2012 show, the accident of the original comics, the weird scientific/reincarnation stuff from the IDW comics) so I'm pretty surprised here since the only difference with the 2012 show origin story scene is... that they are in their bed. I don't attempt to be mean or anything, but it's more like "TMNT 2012, the novel" right now.
anthonyEstark - 3/23/2014, 6:29 AM
@Osborn If you watch the show, then read this, it's quite a bit different. The timeline, I put quite a bit more detail into Splinter's past, I haven't involved the Kraang yet, and more.
WelcomeBackFrank - 3/23/2014, 6:29 AM
Quotation marks and paragraphs wouldn't kill you. Just saying.
Osborn - 3/23/2014, 7:14 AM
I'll be reading the next part, see were you're going with this but I just couldn't see the point here
anthonyEstark - 3/23/2014, 5:35 PM
I know you some of you guys may not care at the moment but stay tuned, because part 2 is gonna be great.

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