Anthony Stark Presents: TMNT: Origins; Chapter 2

Well, I got some surprisingly great feedback on chapter 1 of my latest fan-script, TMNT: Origins, and so, after a little work, I finished chapter 2. Hit the Jump to read on!

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By anthonyEstark - 3/24/2014
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Doopie - 3/24/2014, 6:07 AM
i thought stockman might make an appearance. this is cool dude but i wouldn't mind them being a little longer...i've gotta have something to do at work!

and good on you for taking people's advice about how it's all laid out, much easier to read
Doopie - 3/24/2014, 6:08 AM
also loved how Mikey calls Splinter 'dude'
anthonyEstark - 3/24/2014, 6:08 AM
Some of you may think this is still too close to the 2012 series, but I'll soon be doing stuff that the new show could never dream about doing.
anthonyEstark - 3/24/2014, 6:09 AM
Ok Doop, I'll try to make them longer.
MrNiklander - 3/24/2014, 10:29 AM
This is pretty good man keep it up
AXE - 3/24/2014, 11:02 AM
Was very easy to read as Doopie put out, I wouldn't mind it being a bit longer as it felt a bit rushed, but so far really nice man, lookin forward to chapter 3

I give this chapter an Axe Rise, nice work

BatManHeisenberg - 3/25/2014, 12:38 AM
Maybe do the entire thing, and then post it? Good work, by the way...
anthonyEstark - 3/25/2014, 7:44 AM
@BatManHeisenberg I'm planning on doing like DrDoom does, post each chapter, then do the whole thing.

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