Superman: Lost Son - Fan Script

Superman: Lost Son - Fan Script

Hi, part one of my Superman fan script. I hope to be able to bring in a whole load of different Superman characters, both heroes and villains. Hope you enjoy part one.

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By Knightrider - 11/25/2012
I had to write this at work, so maybe a few errors, which I will correct when I get home. Hope you enjoy. Comments, both good and bad, welcome, just be constructive either way.

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Superman: Lost Son Part One
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TheRock234 - 11/25/2012, 5:35 PM
So Ruby Jones is just another evil scientist but is Russian and is like Hugo strange without being Hugo strange okay. I do like how didn't pick a villain who isn't another kryptonian. just doesn't seem all that interesting to me. Also who the hell beat superman
Knightrider - 11/25/2012, 5:41 PM
@TheRock Ruby Jones was the name of Parasite in the comics, but this version is basically Russia's response to Superman exsisting.

This is part 1 so certain questions will be answered like the one you have asked.

Appreciate your feedback though and thank you for taking the time to read.
MrJusticeAvenger123 - 11/25/2012, 5:45 PM
Not the best superman script ive read but its certainly not the worst. 7.5/10. Looking foward to more :)
95 - 11/25/2012, 10:30 PM
You're definitely getting better. I like your dialogue and the action between conversations (Jones and his drunk). I also like your Lois Lane intro, I bought into the idea that she was referring to Superman. I'm not sure about how you'll balance out Metallo (if you do use him) when you have Parasite. Unless General Lane will be brought back to become Metallo? Otherwise, I'm up for reading the completed product.
comiccow6 - 11/27/2012, 4:10 AM
@MrJusticeAvenger are you referring to mine?

Anyways, this is definitely an improvement over your previous scripts. Dialogue is better than before, and for a script made at work, this is great! Keep it up!
MrJusticeAvenger123 - 11/27/2012, 5:36 PM
@Comiccow6, Yeah, I think yours was great but that doesnt mean his was bad. I liked his but I loved yours. Looking foward to more from both of you.
TTT0809 - 8/28/2013, 12:41 PM
8.5/10. Pretty good.

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